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Monday, January 09, 2006

freedom sessions

it was always the same dream, over and over, a dream with fingers that tangled themselves in her hair or traced her tender spine like a trickle of stars or gripped her solidly by the hips while it thrust itself right inside her subconscious until there was nothing else but the dream that filled the little dots of air and breath and passion between this bed here and that piano over there which he played fluently, the way he played her body each and every night, between her lips, between her thighs, my god, the sighs, the moans, the bent tones that came with her slender ankles unfolding themselves from around his waist to hit the black and white keys, so that in the end, the dream would empty itself out, liquid and angry, and its cry would tear at her, and she would come apart, like shreds of fragrant, fragile affection under one's nails, and she would die just a little bit, with the dream leaving her supine, weeping in wide-eyed, childlike wonder, until it came to her again, the same dream, always the same dream, over and over.

23 comments:

Eastmancolour said...

WHHOOOOAAAAAAA !

transience said...

yeah. it kind of hit me like that, too. damn.

camera shy said...

splendid

truly splendid

as
always
trans

always

mistipurple said...

uttered in a single breath!
but that is to be expected, nothing less.

wala said...

can i borrow that dream?
i promise to return it
and not paraphase anything.
ok, nevermind. its my fault.

transience said...

blog this. thank you. i already told you how it was writing this.

misti. i love run-on sentences.

monster spank. you can have it for the bargain price of a macchiato. see you tomorrow. and i'm bringing a pg-13 dream. still.

MotoRama said...

FUUUUUUUUCK(thats the best compliment i could come up with )!

transience said...

so i pardon the pun even if it's not intended?

midsummerprism said...

aaaaaaaa......wow!

transience said...

thanks!

Enemy of the Republic said...

This is really good! Glad to see your work!

MotoRama said...

Actually it was unintentionally intended..but 'coming' to think of it,it does sound like the perfect thing to say at the 'end'..(this time it is intentional ;))

I bow to the power of trans!

transience said...

eotr. i appreciate that. we missed you around here, that's for sure.

motorama. no need to bow. i am small. hee. =)

car@ said...

OOOHHHH MY OOOOHHHH MY!!!!! again....and again.....and agaaaaaaaiiiinnnnnnnnn....

u are just so fucking splandid!
[okay, have to find a word even better than that to describe you....still thinking of it...give me a few days...too bad i cannot translate the one i have on my mind in spanish....]

transience said...

oh, please do, cara. i'm sure it would sound even lovelier (hotter) in spanish.

car@ said...

You are my officially platonic-virtual lurve---------> tienes una selva apenas pisada por los seres humanos invadiendo tu interior, corriendo por tus venas y bombeada por tu corazón... llena de leonas, de panteras y de hadas que revolotean.

;-)

transience said...

i solicited a wonky little translator to translate this...it was a bit rough around the edges, but i sooo got the concept behind it. you write so beautifully, cara. so beautifully.

car@ said...

Thanks Transii!! actually it was difficult to translate it as well that's why i wrote it in Spanish ;-) and it sounded nicely as well in Spanish ;-P

So glad you got the concept, and yeah....that's how i see YOU!
Kisses that will pleasure your beautifull belly dear! LOVE YA!! ;-*

Cocaine Jesus said...

to expect anything from you is foolish because we really never know quite what you are going to do next do we?
unless we rely upon the knowledge that whatever it is, it will fuck like a cat on vaseline.
and this does.

Enemy of the Republic said...

Wow, now that is an amazing image, CJ.

transience said...

car@. i'll take your untranslated one and raise you a dama de noche.

cocaine jesus. wow.

eotr. i quite agree with you.

GEL said...

OOOOOOO....!!!!!!!!!!
(Loved the stream of consciousness and uh, more... all puns intended.)

transience said...

excellent. i'm glad they were all intentional.

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