Devoted exclusively to the creative process. Here you will see photojournaling, poetry, prose, an occasional review--journaling or philosophical writing can be found on our other blogs. This is our attempt to use our imaginations. Enjoy!

Sunday, December 25, 2005

    S o u n d s   o f   r a i n

Sounds of rain
tell things new
even indoors when
I don't see rain

    even in solitude
    thoughts of you
    come to me like
    sounds of rain

sounds of rain
what else can do?
nearly nothing
maybe a drain

    even in solitude
    no   is it true?
    you come to me
    in sounds of rain

6 comments:

TULIP said...

i really love the crispness of d lines n ofcourse d sounds of rain...;-)
short yet very sweet...

Enemy of the Republic said...

This is beautiful. Thank you, David.

pomedome said...

Rain water catch. Very valuable.
I like this.-JM

Oreen said...

Hey David, can't tell u how nice it is to have you here. I remember you commented on one of my stories on caferati...Blue Women, i think...i go by another name there...

You are the hero...so welcome (although i'm more of a guest here)...

david raphael israel said...

yuuz guyz are entirely too kind;
(Oreen, I don't seem quite to recall abt. Blue Women, ah well)--
thanks again En--

hat-tips, d.i.

Enemy of the Republic said...

Hey, David. Thanks for being here. We love you!