Devoted exclusively to the creative process. Here you will see photojournaling, poetry, prose, an occasional review--journaling or philosophical writing can be found on our other blogs. This is our attempt to use our imaginations. Enjoy!

Thursday, December 29, 2005

Betrayal

Drowning in silence
The moment shrieks
At the gnawing violence
Of this mind’s deceit
But the eyes reveal
What the lips conceal -
A promise broken
And a melancholic defeat.

© Dan Husain
June, 2000

PS: EOTR's poem prompted me to post my version! Oops! I hope I am not cluttering here! :-)

1 comment:

Enemy of the Republic said...

Not cluttering--it's great. I relate.