i have a flower in my pocket
i have a question in my mind
i have a splinter in my awareness
i have an alter ego
who has left me
a message
in a bottle
floating hopefully
in the pool
on whose surface i gaze
hoping her reflection
will have lingered there
lazy as a smile
cute as a wink
2 comments:
i liked the first two verses, flower in my pocket, and the question in my mind. But this idea doesn't continue through out .. WHY? Why just random thoughts follow?
The tread is there. Go back to the alter ego and see if you can pick it up.
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