Devoted exclusively to the creative process. Here you will see photojournaling, poetry, prose, an occasional review--journaling or philosophical writing can be found on our other blogs. This is our attempt to use our imaginations. Enjoy!

Saturday, August 11, 2007

inside me

i have a flower in my pocket

i have a question in my mind

i have a splinter in my awareness

i have an alter ego

who has left me

a message

in a bottle

floating hopefully

in the pool

on whose surface i gaze

hoping her reflection

will have lingered there

lazy as a smile

cute as a wink


Nabeel said...

i liked the first two verses, flower in my pocket, and the question in my mind. But this idea doesn't continue through out .. WHY? Why just random thoughts follow?

Russell Ragsdale said...

The tread is there. Go back to the alter ego and see if you can pick it up.