i see you,
going up in smoke.
i exhale you,
and you form patterns on my wall.
Devoted exclusively to the creative process. Here you will see photojournaling, poetry, prose, an occasional review--journaling or philosophical writing can be found on our other blogs. This is our attempt to use our imaginations. Enjoy!
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5 comments:
great ambiguity---
thanks
derick
@derick: thank you :)
beautiful!!!!
I like the use of, for lack of better words, negative space. As Derick calls it, "ambiguity" sometimes is far better than descriptive langauge or imagery.
i love the header artwork of the page,
its really dramatic.
~_^
the picture compensates the briefness of the poem, i like it
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