Devoted exclusively to the creative process. Here you will see photojournaling, poetry, prose, an occasional review--journaling or philosophical writing can be found on our other blogs. This is our attempt to use our imaginations. Enjoy!

Monday, February 18, 2008



i see you,
going up in smoke.
i exhale you,
and you form patterns on my wall.

6 comments:

derick said...

great ambiguity---
thanks
derick

blow said...

@derick: thank you :)

Neers said...

beautiful!!!!

purple rain said...

thank you :)

Ó Seasnáin said...

I like the use of, for lack of better words, negative space. As Derick calls it, "ambiguity" sometimes is far better than descriptive langauge or imagery.

Gerald Galindez said...

i love the header artwork of the page,
its really dramatic.

~_^

the picture compensates the briefness of the poem, i like it